I'm entering a t-shirt design contest put on by one of the groups here on campus. the only rules are that the design must be appropriate (no boobies or bad words) and have some sort of positive message. this is what I intend to submit:
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I would like any suggestions/opinions/constructive criticism you guys are willing to dish, because I'd really like to win this contest. but I also understand that the style isn't going to appeal to everyone. so, uh. hit me.
(not literally, all you smart asses)